Recommended Adjustments

As a result of further feedback from my work, here are the adjustments I am going to implement in order to perfect the final cut of my music video:

• Thoroughly check lip sync
• Remove blackout cuts
• Remove shadow over piano
• Remove zoom change from walking footage
• Start 3:30 band walking away clip slightly later

Laughter Lines Music Video - Possible Final Cut

Here is the potential final cut of my music video Laughter Lines. Following on from the previous edit, I have made the following adjustments in response to the feedback I received:

• Incorporated more reverse flying picture footage
• Colour graded all footage
• Reduced grain on some poorly lit footage
• Removed sightings of the tripod and my shadow
• Fixed audio/lip sync issues
• Included more shots of the instruments
• Constructed the ending to the video

I am still open to any feedback and comments you wish to make. Enjoy!

Second Draft Music Video Feedback

Here is the resulting feedback I received from the peer viewing of my draft music video. From this feedback, I will make various suggested improvements to my video, which are listed below. Apologies for the poor sound quality!

Changes Required:
*Longer flying picture footage

*Fix or re-shoot grainy footage (Colour Grade - Hint of Sepia?)

*Tripod briefly in frame

*Shadow can be seen on one tracking shot (expand footage area)

*Sync issues
*Slightly Anticlimactic finish
*Include Keyboard shot

Updated Draft of my Music Video

Here is an updated draft of my Music Video, incorporating various changes from the previous draft with the inclusion of my narrative to partner the performance element of my video. I will publish the feedback received from my peer viewing in the following post. Enjoy!

My Very Very Rough draft!

I must stress this is a very early draft of my upcoming music video, and is far from finished. It currently only includes the performance element of the music video, as the narrative is yet to be included, along with much improvements as a result of the feedback I have and will receive. This is what I have so far, enjoy!